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The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the number of cars produced in three countries from 2003 to 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table provides the information about manufacturing numbers of
four wheeler
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four-wheeler
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 road
vehicle
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vehicles
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 in three different countries from
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the year
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year
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years
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 2003 to 2006.
Overall
, it can be seen that
Thailand
 produced
highest
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the highest
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 amount of
cars
 as compared to
other
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the other
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 two countries
Australia
 and
Argentina
. Starting up with
year
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the year
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 2003
Argentina
 made 235,088
cars
while
Australia
 produced almost double
number
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the number
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 of
cars
 452,163 in
same
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the same
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year
 as compared to
Argentina
, but
Thailand
 showed up highest number 735,852 in
production
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the production
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 of
cars
 in
given
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the given
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year
. Following up another
year
 2006
it is clear that
 the numeracy of automobile vehicle production appeared with changes as in
Argentina
 and
Thailand
 surged upward and in
Australia
 it fell suddenly. Moving forward to next
year
 2009
Australia
's and
Thailand
's interest in making
cars
 decreased.
However
 ,
Argentina's
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Argentina is
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 showing
up
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apply
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increasing numbers.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words year, thailand, cars, australia, argentina with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 2 times.
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