The graph below gives information about the number of estimated cars from 2020 to 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the number of estimated cars from 2020 to 2035.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
given line chart depicts how much-estimated
cars
is
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produced in four regions with the timespan between 2020 and 2035.
Overall
, it can be seen that the manufacturing rates of Japan, the UK and the USA showed a significant decrease over the given period,
while
the numbers of manufactured in China experienced a steady rise. In 2020, Japan headed the list regarding the estimated
number
of
cars
around 350.000 and reached its peak of over 360.000 in 2025 before falling gradually to 100.000 in the final year. In the meantime, the USA and the UK experienced
the
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similar trend starting from 300.000 and 200.000 respectively and showed a steady
decrese
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decrease
over the given timeline. These two regions had the same estimated
number
in 2030 reaching 100.000 throughout the period, exceeding Japan's rate in 2035 and reaching almost 50.000
at the end
of the period,
while
The USA reached around 30.000.
On the other hand
, China was the only country that experienced steady growth among these four countries even though China was the lowest in 2020 with an estimated
number
of 100.000
cars
.
However
, it showed a steady growth to its peak in 2035 with around 145.000 estimated
number
of
cars
.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • estimated
  • projection
  • statistical
  • to soar
  • to fluctuate
  • steady
  • noteworthy
  • incremental
  • exponential
  • forecast
  • saturate
  • plateau
  • peak
  • trend
  • implications
  • automotive industry
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