the diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summaris the information by selectin and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The flow chart illustrates the steps in the process of recycling
aluminium
drink cans
. As the picture shows, it can be seen that there are stages of making cans
into other useful products consisting of three flows.
Looking into more detail, firstly
, the first process is using an enormous machine that changes cans
from the drinks machine turned into rubbish which was thrown at the collecting centre
. Then
, the rubbish from the collection centre
is brought to the recycling centre
by van. At the next step, the litter turned into a certain structure, such
as a rectangle, processed by a machine to make the next step easier.
Secondly
, the next process is using smaller machines that don't require a large energy. At this
step, constructed waste is treated to be other results that are more useful than before at the aluminium
recycling plant. At this
centre
, debris which is made into squares is melted down until it turns into old aluminium
. Then
, it is frozen into the new aluminium
. Next,
it is formed into an aluminium
roll and then
the results is
used for producing new Change the verb form
are
cans
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