Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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contain high levels of

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more unaffordable to encourage

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to reduce

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for their bodies.

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products definitely

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of seeing the doctors, as

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products rather than

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consume sugary meals,

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purchase

these for kids without any concern.

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the prices of sugary eats not only forces populations to save more salary but

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health issues, if

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