The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa subscribing to mobile and fixed-line phones from 1994 to 2004.

The line graph below shows the percentage of people in Africa subscribing to mobile and fixed-line phones from 1994 to 2004.
The line graph illustrates the percentages of people in Africa who subscribed to mobile and
fixed-line
phones
between 1994 and 2004.
Overall
, there were upward trends for both of the
phone
subscribers percentages throughout the years.
However
,
it is clear that
the use of
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phones
was more popular at the beginning of the period,
whereas
the mobile
phone
percentages rose the popularity in the final period. In 1994, 1.7% of African inhabitants subscribed to
fixed-line
phones
, which was higher than mobile
phone
subscribers, at only 0.06%. Both types of
phone
subscriptions gradually increased over the four following years, with mobile
phones
gaining more popularity than
fixed-line
phones
and overtook its position at 2.5% in 2000. From 2000 onwards,
while
the share of
fixed-line
subscribers continued to slowly increase, the proportion of mobile
phone
users saw a dramatic growth, reaching a peak at 8.8% in the final year, compared with the
fixed-line
users at only 3.3% in the same year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fixed-line, phones, phone with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Telecommunications
  • Subscription
  • Fixed-line phone
  • Mobile phone
  • Percentage
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Trend
  • Significant
  • Stagnation
  • Advancements
  • Affordability
  • Convenience
  • Implications
  • Economy
  • Society
  • Prediction
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