describe a graph that shows average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globalisers.
The graph predicts the gross usage of domestic products in
last
forty years in wealthy, Correct article usage
the last
gobilised
and non - Correct your spelling
globalised
gobalised
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globalised
globalized
countries
from Change the article
the year
year
1960 to 1990.
Fix the agreement mistake
years
Firstly
, there is extraordinaray
growth of local products from Correct your spelling
extraordinary
extraordinarily
gobalisers
and there Correct your spelling
globalizers
globalised
extragavant
decrease Correct your spelling
extravagant
of
local products from wealthy Change preposition
in
countries
.
In addition
, in 1960 the highest proporation
of locally produced goods Correct your spelling
proportion
were
bought by wealthy Unnecessary verb
apply
countries
was 4.8% respectively,which almost got fall down to 2.8% by the year 1970 and further
decliced
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declined
to
2.1% to 2.0% Change preposition
from
till
1980 to 1990.Change preposition
from
However
,there was constant growth of gobalisers
from 1.8% in 1960 and almost touched 4.9% in Correct your spelling
globalizers
globalised
past
30 years till 1990 as Correct article usage
the past
compare
to wealthy Wrong verb form
compared
countries
.
In conclusion, all three sectors reamained
unchanged between 2.9 to 3.2 Correct your spelling
remained
remain
percent
in Change the spelling
per cent
1970s
.Change the article
the 1970s
moreover
, non - gobalisers
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globalised
globalizers
gdp
decreased in Correct your spelling
GDP
year
1980 to 0.9 Change the article
the year
percent
and got Change the spelling
per cent
slight
increased in past years 1.9%respectively.Change the adjective
slightly
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