The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how electronic power is produced by
hydroelectric
power system. Correct article usage
a hydroelectric
This
type of generating centre is usually located near the river so that we can use its water
in order
to generate electricity.
Firstly
, during the day, the river’s water
falls down from the high-level reservoir and the water
flows down through a narrow slope. Furthermore
, the flowing water
hits the turbines which
eventually results into
its spinning.Change preposition
in
Then
, it is transferred to power lines and national grids for distribution to homes, industrial area
and agricultural places.
After that, Fix the agreement mistake
areas
in
the end of the day Change the preposition
at
time
the Add a comma
time,
water
is stored in low-level
reservoir. During the Add an article
the low-level
a low-level
night time
, all the mentioned steps are reversed. Correct your spelling
nighttime
Water
is pumped into the turbine from the low
-
level reservoir and electricity is generated again. Correct your spelling
low-
This
cycle continuously is carried out every 24 hours.
To pen
down, Verb problem
point
This
process plays an important role in country's
progress because every country depends on electricity.Correct article usage
the country's
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