The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The picture denotes the floor plan of a public library 2 decades ago and today.
Overall
, there are several parts that have been changed, and other sections have been deleted between 20 years ago and now.
Library Linking Words
in
20 years ago, Change preposition
apply
entrance
was located in Add an article
the entrance
South
. Beside of gateway, there Correct article usage
the South
were
Change the verb form
was
enquiry
desk Correct article usage
an enquiry
in
Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
right
and Correct article usage
the right
reading
Correct article usage
a reading
room
Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
on
left
. In the Correct article usage
the left
central
of buildings, there were tables and chairs. In Replace the word
centre
Use synonyms
right
and left Add an article
the right
section
of tables and chairs were adult non-fiction and fiction Fix the agreement mistake
sections
books
. In Use synonyms
North of
parts, there were children's Replace the word
the northern
book
Fix the agreement mistake
books
in
Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
right
and CDs, Correct article usage
the right
video
and computer games Fix the agreement mistake
videos
in
Change preposition
on
left
.
There are several distinctions of the library today. There is Correct article usage
the left
cafe
Add an article
a cafe
in
Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
right
of Correct article usage
the right
gateway
, and Add an article
the gateway
a gateway
computer
Correct article usage
the computer
room
Use synonyms
is
moved becoming in Wrong verb form
has been
left
of Add an article
the left
gate
. The tables and chairs are deleted so that in central Add an article
the gate
of
buildings Change preposition
apply
is being
empty. Adult Wrong verb form
are
finction
Correct your spelling
fiction
books
Use synonyms
is
changed becoming all reference Change the verb form
are
books
, and in part of central's Use synonyms
right
, there is Use synonyms
information
desk. In section of North, there are lecture Correct article usage
an information
room
Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
on
Use synonyms
right
and children's fiction Correct article usage
the right
books
Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
on
left
, and Correct article usage
the left
also
there adds the story Linking Words
telling
events in the same Correct your spelling
story-telling
room
Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
on
children's
fiction Correct article usage
the children's
books
.Use synonyms
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words right, room, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
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