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The table below gives information about the value (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.

The table below gives information about the value (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.
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table below represents data about the value of
export
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the export
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 of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to certain countries in 2 years.
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New Zealand had
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