IELTS Writing Task Chart for The table below gives information about the value (NZ$) of exports of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012.
of kiwi fruit from New Zealand to certain countries in 2 years.
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New Zealand had
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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