The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.

The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000.
The chart gives us information about the quantity of energy produced by wind in four different nations between 1985 and 2000.
Overall
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, we can see that during so many years the gap between these countries was abysmal with a clear advantage over the United States.
Then
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, the other nations
also
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gained strength, in fact, Denmark passed the United States in recent years. In 1985, the USA generated 1200 megawatts using wind as a resource with an enormous difference from countries
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as Denmark, Germany or India which produced between 200 and 400. In 1990,
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the US evolved its production by 400 MW, the other ones increased between 200 and 300. 5 years later, the American country produced the same quantity of energy whilst the Dennish country grew by 800 MW reaching 1200, and Germany and India both produced 800.
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, in 2000, Denmark overtook the United States, producing more than 1,600 megawatts compared to 1,500. India produced 1,200 and Germany 900.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • wind energy generation
  • megawatts (MW)
  • renewable energy
  • energy production
  • growth trend
  • decline
  • technological advancements
  • government policies
  • historical data
  • relative contribution
  • energy mix
  • comparison
  • renewable resources
  • sustainability
  • capacity
  • installations
  • annual production
  • percent increase/decrease
  • between 1985 and 2000
  • notable changes
  • country-specific trends
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