Dear Madam, I am Sarah. I live in Canada. I want to studying your training course and I do not know any information about the course. I am sure you can help me.

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Dear Madam, I am Sarah. I live in Canada. I want to

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your training course and I do not know any information about the course. I am sure you can help me. I would like to suggest that you should write some facts about the programme.

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curriculum. If I do not know it, I can not join because I live far from your city. But I know your online courses are so excellent. I am fond of your course. I think you are careful

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my request. Thanks for you. Sincerely Sarah.

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0Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Dear Madam, I am Sarah. I live in Canada. I want to studying your training course and I do not know any information about the course. I am sure you can help me.

Fully explain your ideas

The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. The use of social media is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? You should write at least 250 words.

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Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own countries. Others claim that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both opinions and tell which side do you agree?