The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.
The
digaram
depicts step by step how olive Correct your spelling
diagram
oil
is created. Overall
, there are seven main steps to produce the
olive Correct article usage
apply
oil
, those are; picking, rinsing, smashing, bagging, pressing, separating oil
and water
, and saving into
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for
the
storage and sale is the Correct article usage
apply
last
process.
to begin
with, the olive cherry is harvested and picked by Add an article
a farmer
the farmer
farmer
from Fix the agreement mistake
farmers
th
the Correct your spelling
the
agriculture
land. All of them are rinsed with cold Replace the word
agricultural
water
. it makes sure that the cherry is clean from any contamination. After that, it is transfered
to the smashing process by using Correct your spelling
transferred
belt
conveyor. The result of smashing Correct article usage
a belt
are
olive paste and olive stones and only olive paste can be continued to the next process, whilst olive stone is left. The olive paste Change the verb form
is
then
transfered into Add a missing verb
is then
bag
with holes and Add an article
a bag
the bag
then
it is pressed. when it is pressed, the oil
will come out from the hole. The oil
which has been produced is
still Unnecessary verb
apply
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
water
content and it should be sparated
with Correct your spelling
separated
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a sparator
sparator
. After Correct your spelling
separator
oil
and water
are sparated
, the olive Correct your spelling
separated
oil
then
transfer
to Change the verb form
transfers
the
storage and Correct article usage
apply
ready
to sell Add a missing verb
is ready
for
a customer.Change preposition
to
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