The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates a series of steps in

production

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the production

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of

sugar

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from the

sugar

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cane.

Overall

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, it can clearly be seen there are 7 processes involved in the making of

sugar

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First,

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the

sugar

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canes in the field need 12-18 months to grow. After the

sugar

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canes settle, farmers will crop the plants. There are two

mechanism

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that they can use, the first one by use

a

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of a

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tractor and the second one by use

a

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of a

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tool.

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, with the crushing machine,

juice

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is made from

sugar

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canes

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cane

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Next,

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the

juice

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moves to the limestone filter and

become

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purified. The

juice

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will go to the boiling tubes with enough heat,

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as

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and as

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a

result

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result,

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juice

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becomes syrup,

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step

known

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as evaporation. In the making of

sugar

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, there is a centrifuge that will

separates

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crystal from

syrup

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the syrup

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Finally

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, after a long journey,

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sugar

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the sugar

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crystal will move into a container that will dry and cool until

become

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becomes

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sugar

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.