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You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be social event's organiser.Write a letter to the Training Organizer: -expressing your interest in the role -requesting more information about it -explain what experience you have

#month #programme #uk #head #course #participants #event #organiser #organizer #interest #role #information #-explain
Dear Sir/Madam, Hope
this
 letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits.I am attending
on
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the
course
.
This
course
 has been many comfort and very good leaders.I am going to in the
course
 learning
computer
 programs,drawing and different images.Nowadays.In the world
this
course
been
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 very popular and very good
give
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 an education. Has there is
dormitory
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,
five time
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 food and football stadium? Am I
participiting
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participating
 in the
course
? Am I getting should be there
is
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high quality
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 education and should
been
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this
is
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 for reading
a books
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? Am I learning a lot of new languages?
Although
 I am learning about
computer
 technology. I am creating the
programms
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programmes
programme
. Rather many to youngs teaching new
computer
 programs and Phyton program. I am been
very
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 good experiment.Surely I am
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the
course
 the best teacher and the best
computer
 programmer.I have finished Local
Computer
 Technology University. Yours faithfully, Khusan Esomurodov
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greeting and closing
Start your letter with a proper greeting, using the recipient's name if possible, or 'Dear Training Organizer' if the name is unknown.
task achievement
Clearly state your intention in the opening paragraph, such as expressing interest in the social event's organizer role.
logical structure
Separate your letter into clear paragraphs, each representing a different aspect of the prompt. For example, one paragraph about your interest, one requesting information, and one detailing your experience.
single idea per paragraph
Stay on topic and ensure each sentence contributes to the purpose of the paragraph. Avoid irrelevant details about the course content and focus on your abilities relevant to organizing social events.
greeting and closing
Conclude the letter with a proper closing statement, such as 'I look forward to your positive response' or 'Thank you for considering my application,' followed by 'Yours sincerely/faithfully' and your full name.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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