The pie chart below show the online shopping sales for retail sector in new Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
The pie charts illustrate how four different products were sold using the online platform in New Zealand in the years 2003 and 2013.
Overall
, it can be seen that the selling of books and film /music increased and the other two categories travel and clothes lost their population during one decade.
In 2003, travelling was the most famous trend among New Zealand citizens whereas
reading books was the least marked 19 per cent of people.However
, books became
increased by 3 Verb problem
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per centage
in 2013 and travelling decreased significantly in 2013.
In 2003, Online films and music shipping was shown at 21 per cent of citizens Correct your spelling
per cent
however
, it gained huge popularity in 2013 by percent
of 13.After one decade, online sales of clothing became limited but in the beginning, it was higher than by 8%.Correct your spelling
a percentage
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