describe a graph that shows average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, globalisers and non-globalisers.
The bar chart depicts
average
annual Gross Domestic Product (GDP) Correct article usage
the average
growth
in 3 types such
as wealthy countries
, globalisers
and non
Add a hyphen
non-globalisers
globalisers
from 1960 until 1990. Overall
, wealthy countries
has
Wrong verb form
had
a
highest Change the article
the
growth
in 1960 and experienced a downward trend over thirthy
years Correct your spelling
thirty
while
globalisers
got the opposite, they faced an upward trend. Correct your spelling
globalised
globalists
On the other hand
, Non
Add a hyphen
Non-globalisers
globalisers
showed a fluctuate
trend.
Looking in more detail, in 1960, rich Change the verb form
fluctuating
countries
has
Wrong verb form
had
a
highest revenue at nearly 5%, after that, they decreased rapidly Change the article
the
at
a level of 2% in 1990. Change preposition
to
However
, globaliser
Correct your spelling
globalised
countries
took differently
. They started at around 1% Correct pronoun usage
it differently
growth
of Gross Domestic Product in 1960 and then
it increased significantly to a level of fifth percent
in 1990.
Change the spelling
per cent
On the contrary
, non
Add a hyphen
non-globalisers
globalisers
started at 2,5% growth
of revenue, then
it went up and down until hit the bottom to a low of under 1% and ended up with a low rise at a level of 1,5%.Submitted by Dedeways244 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words growth, countries, globalisers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 4 times.
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