The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement- making process , and how cement us used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagrams illustrate the stages and equipment used in
cement
production
and concrete production
. I will explain this
production
process in the following paragraphs in detail.
Overall
, the manufacturing of cement
consists of various tools such
as a mixer, rotating heater, crusher and grinder whereas
four materials are used for concrete production
.
To start, in cement
production
the process starts with limestone and clay Add a comma
production,
begin
crushed and transformed into powder and later it passes to a rotating heater through a mixer. Verb problem
being
Powder
is mixed and heated, Add an article
The powder
then
a grinder is used to make cement
from the heated powder. Those cement
powders are packed in bags for future use.
Next is concrete manufacturing , in concrete manufacture different materials are used to produce cement
, including cement
15%, 25% of sand ,50% of gravel which is small stones and 10% of water are put into the concrete mixer and then
it finally
produced end product which is concrete.Submitted by insighttribez on
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