The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

The graph denotes the

demand

for

England

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electricity

throughout typical days in

winter

and summer, and the pie chart

ilustrates

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illustrates

how

electricity

is utilized in

home

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homes

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in England.

Overall

, the

demand

of

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for

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electricity

is more used in

winter

than in summer.

Additionally

, there are many electricities utilized in English

home

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homes

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.

Firstly

, in

winter

, the higher

demand

of

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for

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electricity

is around 50000, and it is at 9 pm.

While

,

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the lowest

using

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use

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the

electricity

in

winter

at

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in

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morning

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the morning

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about 7 until 8 am. In summer, at 12 to 15 pm and 23 pm occur the higher

demand

with 20000.

Whereas

, approximately 6 to 9 am, the

demand

is only around 15000.

Secondly

, most people in England frequently use vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools because it has

the

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percentage of 52%. Oven and washing machines are 18% that are using

this

electricity

.

While

, societies who utilize heating

room

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rooms

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, heating water, lightning, TV and radio are only 15%.