The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

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demand

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for

England

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electricity

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throughout typical days in

winter

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and summer, and the pie chart

ilustrates

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how

electricity

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is utilized in

home

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in England.

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, the

demand

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of

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electricity

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is more used in

winter

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than in summer.

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, there are many electricities utilized in English

home

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.

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, in

winter

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, the higher

demand

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of

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for

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electricity

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is around 50000, and it is at 9 pm.

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,

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the lowest

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the

electricity

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in

winter

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at

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morning

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about 7 until 8 am. In summer, at 12 to 15 pm and 23 pm occur the higher

demand

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with 20000.

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, approximately 6 to 9 am, the

demand

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is only around 15000.

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, most people in England frequently use vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools because it has

the

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percentage of 52%. Oven and washing machines are 18% that are using

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electricity

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.

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, societies who utilize heating

room

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, heating water, lightning, TV and radio are only 15%.