In the modern era, more
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every day by
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issue has a lot of upsides including communicating
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relatives
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it has caused some problems but I think its advantages fully outweigh its disadvantages which I'm going to explain more about in the rest of
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with, advocates of using social media to contact relatives tout its many advantages. Technology has brought us the capability to be in touch with each other anytime we wish. Previously,
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at certain times of
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, members of a family can call each other any part of the day which can strengthen the bond between
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, a survey in 2020 indicates that members of
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compared to a decade ago.
, technology has eliminated the distance between individuals and they can keep in touch
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miles away from each other. My uncle,
, resides in the US and other parts of my family live in Iran. Despite
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which can keep our relationship strong.
Despite all the benefits of virtual communication, It has some critics too. Virtual meetings can reduce visiting each other which can weaken our friendship with other
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that releases dopamine hormone which makes us happy.
, social media can make us more depressed.
, some hackers misuse these situations and steal a lot of information that sometimes can destroy the lives of individuals.
, in 2022, there was a hacker in
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and
, put their whole lives at risk.
, using social media to talk to buddies and relatives has
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more prevalent in recent years. Even with some of its
, I still think it is a positive development but we shouldn't use it a lot and devote some of our time to
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