Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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Do you remember the famous phrase: "Men from Mars and women from Venus"? why we are so different? We need to think if

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difference is actual in nowadays. First of all, in the Middle

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, the

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of the woman was just to be a good mother and a good wife.

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a man should earn money and food for the family. Do you think it is really

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nowadays? I don'

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think so. Today, we can choose. So, if a woman has a wish to be a driver or even an

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astronaut

, she can allow herself to be them. We have a

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of women who became famous scientists, politics and so on.

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, Maria Curi or Margareth Tacher. As for men, we have a lot of famous designers, makeup artists and models.

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, Christian Dior, Georgio Armani or Robert Pattinson (yes,

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one who is a famous actor, he was a model in the past). So, the

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that you play in your everyday life is not connected with your sex.

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, from my personal experience both mother and father can be good parents.

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, sharing responsibilities

make

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makes

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our life and family's and partner's relationships better. In order to understand each other we need to participate in each

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lifes

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lives

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. As for me, it is normal, if I ask my partner to play with children when I need

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to visit my nail artist. Same for my husband, it is okay to ask me to help with something in his daily work routine,

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if he needs to find some information or he needs some peace of advice. I can tell you more, sharing responsibilities and our support make our relationships healthy and cozy for both of us. In

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you don'

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need to fear to be someone, because

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role

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doesn'

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fit you by sex, orientation or physical structure. You have a strong desire to be a

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driver, but you are a woman, don'

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think about

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- just be yourself.

You

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are a man, but have a wish to be

makeup

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a makeup

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artist,

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share your talent with everyone. At least, you can be the best one in every

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, if you think it

fit

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logical structure

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

377 words

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Men and women can never share the same responsibilities at home and in everyday life. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Your opinion

Some people like to spend their leisure time with their colleagues, while others prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a good thing to spend leisure time with a colleague?

being a celebrity such as star bring a lot of problems and benefits.

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