The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.

The graph below shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
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The diagram above illustrates how much electric
power
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is needed during normal days in
winter
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and summer in England.
Overall
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, the people's
demand
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for electric
power
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is much higher during the cold when compared with that in the summertime, with the majority of it being used for heating and household appliances. Looking at the first chart,
it is clear that
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during
winter
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, the public tends to use more
electricity
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with the
demand
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ranging from 30000 units to about 50000 at its peak, more than doubling the numbers reported in the summertime, which ranges from 15000 to 20000 electrical units. Demands reach their lowest during the early morning at around 7-9 AM and peak during nighttime at 10-11PM for both seasons.
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, the
demand
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for
power
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during
winter
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fluctuates a lot,
while
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the
demand
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in summer tends to be quite stable. The difference in
demand
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can be explained by looking at what people are using
electricity
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for - with over half of it being used for heating purposes, and
this
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correlates with the
demand
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graph since during
winter
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, people need to stay warm.
Electricity
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is
also
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used to
power
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big household appliances, namely ovens, kettles and washing machines - taking 18% of
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used. Smaller appliances
such
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as lighting, TV and radio take up 15%, and so do vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, winter, demand, electricity with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • demand for electricity
  • typical days
  • line graph
  • seasonal variation
  • peak
  • fluctuations
  • exceeds
  • units of electricity
  • distribution of electricity usage
  • heating
  • water heating
  • combined total
  • major uses
  • lighting
  • ovens
  • kettles
  • washing machines
  • miscellaneous appliances
  • electronics
  • total usage
  • account for
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