The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian Countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The line chart illustrates the populations of people who lived in the cities in 4 Asian Countries between 1970 and 2020,

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with the prediction for the years 2030 and 2040.

Overall

, the percentage of all countries increased from 15% to 85%. The highest

population

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populations

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in 1970 were Phillippines and Malaysia at 30%,

whereas

Thailand at 20%, followed by Indonesia at 15%. After that, it experienced an upward trend from all the categories until 2020.

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, the prediction for the years 2030 and 2040 will increase steadily. It will climb up to 80% for Malaysia

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Phillipines

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the Phillipines

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which started at the same percentage of

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. The second position for the highest population of people living in the cities will be Indonesia at 60%, which started at the fourth position in 1970. It will be followed by

Phillippines

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the Phillippines

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and

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Thailand at 50% and 40% respectively.