The pie charts below show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in scotland for 20 years ago and last year

The pie charts below show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in scotland for 20 years ago and last year
The given two pie charts illustrate the data
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electricity
generation in Scotland
for
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twenty
years
ago and
for
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last
year
.
Overall
, it can be seen that among the 7
energy
sources
, only nuclear, oil and other renewable
energy
sources
have increased over the past
year
compared to two decades. The various
sources
of
energy
used in Scotland and the amount of
energy
gained from each of them have not significantly changed when comparing the values from
last
year
and
twenty
years
ago. The greatest amount of
electricity
was generated from coal, with 41.4% being generated
twenty
year
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ago and 32.7% being generated
last
year
’s data. Compared to
twenty
years
ago, the country has made slight changes to its reliance on certain
sources
for the generation of
electricity
.
Although
the major generation remains coal ( followed again by gas,) there has been an increase in the use of oil from 2.1% to 4.0%, nuclear
energy
( from 19.6% to 26.4%) and other renewable
sources
( from 2.8% to 5.1%) The most significant changes would be to the use of oil and other renewable
sources
, as the use of these two
sources
last
year
was almost double the percentage of
electricity
that was being generated from them
twenty
 
years
 ago.
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