The graph shows changes in the proportion of Internet users in three different countries from 1999 to 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph depicts changes in the proportion of people who are using

internet

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the internet

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grouped in three different countries from 1999 to 2009. Generally, the people of Canada had the greatest percentage of

Internet

users

compare

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compared

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to other countries. But, the statistic in Mexico shows that they had the lowest

number

of

internet

users

. It can be seen that

,

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the statistic for Canadian

internet

users

from 1999 to 2001 had been

increase

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increasing

increased

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gradually to 30 per

cent

.

Then

it kept growing dramatically to 2003

approximately

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at approximately

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60 per

cent

, since

then

, the

number

kept increasing until

they

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they are

they were

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able to

reached

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reach

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100 per

cent

of their population.

Moreover

, in

USA

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the USA

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they already had a good start, because stood at 1999 they were able to hit 20 per

cent

of the citizens.

Then

, from 2001 to 2005 the statistic increased gradually to 70 per

cent

. After

that

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that,

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there were not any huge changes, because from 2005 to 2009 the

number

increased to only 80 per

cent

of their population.

However

, in

Mexico

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Mexico,

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it is clear that

they had the fewest

of

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apply

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Internet

users

. From 1999 to 2001 there

was

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were

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only a

little

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few

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changes that only hit 10 per

cent

, the situation changed from 2001 to 2005 because the

number

rose

around

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to around

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30 per

cent

.

Then

,

stood at

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from

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2005 until 2009 the proportion of

Internet

users

increased gradually

around

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to around

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40 per

cent

of their population.