The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the key features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
process
of beverage cans recycling. Use synonyms
This
is a hand-made Linking Words
process
with a circular flow. The starting point is collecting the waste and ending it at the beverages machine.
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Firstly
, at the collection centre, separate all the waste into two categories, Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
aluminium
and steel. Use synonyms
Secondly
, all the separate waste is transported by truck to the recycling centre. Linking Words
This
is the place where the fundamental Linking Words
process
takes place, the name of the Use synonyms
process
is "Use synonyms
aluminium
recycling plant", and it includes 4 steps. It starts with the melting phase of the old Use synonyms
aluminium
. Use synonyms
Next,
the new Linking Words
aluminium
is created. After that, turn the new Use synonyms
aluminium
into a roll and Use synonyms
then
make it into new cans. Linking Words
Finally
, after all the necessary phases are done, the recycle cans can be used and put into the beverage machine.
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Overall
, Linking Words
this
recycling Linking Words
process
is a combination of three steps with an additional 4 steps in the recycling centre.Use synonyms
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