The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the key features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the key features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
process
of beverage cans recycling.
This
is a hand-made
process
with a circular flow. The starting point is collecting the waste and ending it at the beverages machine.
Firstly
, at the collection centre, separate all the waste into two categories,
such
as
aluminium
and steel.
Secondly
, all the separate waste is transported by truck to the recycling centre.
This
is the place where the fundamental
process
takes place, the name of the
process
is "
aluminium
recycling plant", and it includes 4 steps. It starts with the melting phase of the old
aluminium
.
Next,
the new
aluminium
is created. After that, turn the new
aluminium
into a roll and
then
make it into new cans.
Finally
, after all the necessary phases are done, the recycle cans can be used and put into the beverage machine.
Overall
,
this
recycling
process
is a combination of three steps with an additional 4 steps in the recycling centre.
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