The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

great number of people thought, having a lot of

money

is essential for being fortunate.

While

a handful of other people believe that, there is no relation between wealth and good luck. In my opinion, payment is one of the most effective factors to approach happiness.

However

, there are so many other factors to help us achieve good luck and happiness.

Firstly

,

it is clear that

having a low economic situation is the source of too many problems , and we can see the bad effect of a bad economy in today's

life

.

For doing

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everything we need cash

for instance

,

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if we want to continue our education we have to pay bills, if we need to go to the hospital and need medical care we have to pay for them, even if we want to provide primary activity stuff we need to pay.

Hence

,

for having

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a comfortable and relaxed soul with fewer headaches and problems we must build a high economic situation.

On the other hand

, in

this

,world there are a high number of things which are base for happiness and we are unable to afford or achieve them without a salary. To have a clear example of it, love, trust, honesty

and

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etc .These are things that we can not get from

money

.

Moreover

, there is some other stuff that needs both

money

and our talent and skills,

for instance

, education. We might be able to go to the top university with

money

but if we do not have the intelligence to continue , it would not work.

While

having good knowledge

besides

property is the key to a good

life

. In conclusion, being wealthy can help us to solve a lot of problems in

life

, but

money

is not the only key to a successful and happy

life

.