You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows the number of visitors to four international museums between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the graph by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Press Submit to send to your teacher. Press Help to see model answer.
The line graph shows how many people visited four museums in different countries in the world between 1980 and 2015.
All in all, the Egyptian
Museum
was the most popular, with between approximately 8 and 9 million
visitors
each year. The least popular were the Hermitage and the National Museum
of Anthropology, with no more than 4 million
visitors
each year.
The visitors
to the National Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
Museum
of Anthropology decreased slowly from just over 4 million
in 1980 to around 2 million
in 2015. By contrast
, the visitors
to the Tokyo National Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
Museum
increased from just under 5 million
in 1980 to around 9 million
in 2015.
In addition
, the number of visitors
to the Hermitage stayed about the same over the thirty-five year
period. They fell from just under 4 Add a hyphen
thirty-five-year
million
in 1980 to just over 3 million
in 2000 and then
rose to just under 4 million
again in 2015.Submitted by ASDFGHJKLESSON on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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