Q. Traffic jams and long commutes have become the paradigm in big cities. Some people suggest that introducing alternative forms of transportation can help to reduce both of these problems while others affirm that investing in highway infrastructure would generate the same impact.

Certain people believe that
traffic
jams
and long distances become the example of big
cities
. Meanwhile, some people recommend that introducing different forms of transportation will be helpful to reduce these issues.
However
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others believe that improvement in the highway pattern would be helpful too. On the one hand,
traffic
jams
and
long distance
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travel are very common in larger
cities
, because roads are not enough wider
according to
the
traffic
,
moreover
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big
cities
have
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not enough flyovers and underpass to divide
load
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the load
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of transportation. Finding different ways like making roads wider, flyovers and underpasses will reduce the load of
traffic
.
On the other hand
,
traffic
blockage and lengthy travel in dominant
cities
could be decreased by modifying the highway's pattern around the
city
, by doing
this
the
traffic
load will
be reduce
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in the entire populated areas.
For example
, a
ring-road
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around
the
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lahore
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city
reduces the entire
city
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traffic
jams
and long
distance
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distances
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.
Additionally
,
government
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should make a massive investment
on
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the inner and outer routes of the big
cities
, so the entire populated areas would be safe from noise and air pollution
results
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in
traffic
jams
. It
the
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concluded that
traffic
jams
and long commutes could
be manage
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by finding always routes. Meanwhile, improving highway infrastructure around the
city
could
also
be useful for these issues. In my opinion,
traffic
should be less as possible in the entire
city
, and
this
could happen by
manage
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routes around the
city
.
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