Q. Traffic jams and long commutes have become the paradigm in big cities. Some people suggest that introducing alternative forms of transportation can help to reduce both of these problems while others affirm that investing in highway infrastructure would generate the same impact.

Certain people believe that

traffic

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and long distances become the example of big

cities

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. Meanwhile, some people recommend that introducing different forms of transportation will be helpful to reduce these issues.

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others believe that improvement in the highway pattern would be helpful too. On the one hand,

traffic

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jams

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and

long distance

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travel are very common in larger

cities

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, because roads are not enough wider

according to

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the

traffic

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,

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moreover

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big

cities

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have

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not enough flyovers and underpass to divide

load

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of transportation. Finding different ways like making roads wider, flyovers and underpasses will reduce the load of

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.

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,

traffic

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blockage and lengthy travel in dominant

cities

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could be decreased by modifying the highway's pattern around the

city

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, by doing

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the

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load will

be reduce

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in the entire populated areas.

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around

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city

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reduces the entire

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city

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traffic

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and long

distance

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.

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should make a massive investment

on

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the inner and outer routes of the big

cities

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, so the entire populated areas would be safe from noise and air pollution

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in

traffic

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jams

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. It

the

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concluded that

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and long commutes could

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by finding always routes. Meanwhile, improving highway infrastructure around the

city

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could

also

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be useful for these issues. In my opinion,

traffic

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should be less as possible in the entire

city

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, and

this

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could happen by

manage

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routes around the

city

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.