The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1981-2007.

The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1981-2007.
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The provided line graph depicts how the utilisation (in grams) of different jam types changed over 26 years in Asian countries. A glance at the diagram makes it clear that,at the beginning,
butter
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ranked first and margarine was second,
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low fat produced spreads which started to be used later and were the least popular reached high popularity in the following years. Looking at the details of
butter
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consumption, we can point out that in 1981 it made up 140 grams
then
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slightly went up to 160 grams.The year 1986 witnessed a dramatic decrease in
butter
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consumption, which followed
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decline in numbers until the 2007 year. When it comes to margarine, it was used two times less than
butter
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but in 1991 both were equal.Between 1991 and 1996 it did not see big changes and stood at the same level
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followed a slow drop.It is interesting to note that low fat reduced spreads suddenly climbed in the first years of usage and were at the same level as margarine in 2001.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words butter with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • pattern
  • popularity
  • significant
  • steady increase/decrease
  • peak
  • trough
  • outstrip
  • surpass
  • dip
  • sales
  • culinary preferences
  • market share
  • per capita
  • demographics
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