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Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

#people #habit #books #person
These days,
people
believes
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 reading some
books
 is not always beneficial
while
 some
people
 do not really care as long it is a good routine to start
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.
This
 essay will break down the reasons and give my own perspective There are many
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 of
books
 that
has
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 been spread
of
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out there. Some of them are fictional,
slice of life
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, mystery, and
motivation
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books
. Fictional
books
 are not based on real life, they tend to
gives
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 an interesting plot with particular characters who bring out the story.
This
type
 of
books
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maybe
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 the reason why some
of
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people
 agree that
it
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 not valuable
compare
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 to others that represent
more
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 serious context. That
type
 of
book
 does not provide a fact
therefore
 despite it
is
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 fun to read,
people
 do
no
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not
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 get something to learn.
Moreover
, fictional
books
 tend to have a bunch of pages which
wil
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will
 be a waste of time for someone to read.
On the other hand
, there are still
people
 who
reads
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 any kind of
books
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book
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 because reading itself is
a
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 right thing to do. A
book
is not only provide
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is not only provided
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 with a good story. It has more meaning than that. Someone could enhance vocabulary,
moral
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morals
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 of life, and imagination by reading. There are no
limitation
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limitations
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type
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types
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 of
book
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books
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 which
people
 get the advantages.
For instance
,
fictional
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a fictional
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book
 that aforementioned,
this
type
 of
book
 could
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structure
Make sure your essay has a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The introduction should introduce the topic and provide a clear thesis statement, and the conclusion should summarize the main points and restate your opinion.
cohesion
Organize your ideas logically and make sure each paragraph focuses on a single main point. Use cohesive devices to connect ideas within and between paragraphs.
task response
Develop your arguments with specific examples and detail. Both sides of the discussion need to be presented with clear examples and explanations.
task response
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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  • mental stimulation
  • knowledge acquisition
  • vocabulary expansion
  • stress reduction
  • memory improvement
  • analytical thinking
  • empathy
  • emotional intelligence
  • social cues
  • constructive content
  • morally uplifting
  • misinformation
  • harmful ideologies
  • critical reading skills
  • credible sources
  • inherently good habit
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