The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The presented line graph depicts the
number
of store
closures
and openings
in a particular country from the year 2011 to 2018. On the whole, both the opening and closure rates experienced a declining trend during the said period, although
with
significant fluctuations leading to several instances of role reversals.
Starting with Change preposition
apply
store
closures
, the graph indicates that in 2011, the number
of store
closures
was less than that of store
openings
, at around 6,500. The figure
fell to 6,000 in 2012, although
the closures
began to surpass the openings
in subsequent years. The number
of closures
peaked at over 7,000 in 2013 before declining to approximately 6,600 in 2014. However
, the year 2015 witnessed a dramatic drop in the number
of store
closures
, plummeting to just under 1,000. Following that, the closure rate gradually picked up, reaching around 5,000 by 2016 and maintaining that figure
until 2018.
Turning to new store
openings
, with approximately 8,500 openings
in 2011, the number
of new store
openings
was greater than the number
of store
closures
. The figure
fell to just under 4,000 in 2012, and there was a minor increase in 2013 and 2014, with approximately 5,000 and just over 6,000 openings
, respectively. Afterward
, the rate of new Change the spelling
Afterwards
store
openings
declined, with the figure
hovering around 4,000 for the following three years before reaching a low point of 3,000 in 2018, emerging as the lower of the two categories.Submitted by dentdent4 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, store, closures, openings, figure with synonyms.
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