The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991, and 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts demonstrate the changes in yearly spending by a particular school in
United
Kingdom in 1981, 1991 and 2001. Correct article usage
the United
Overall
, what stands out from the charts is that the spending on Insurance and Furniture
and equipment
was
experienced a growth.
Looking at the details, as regards 1981, Unnecessary verb
apply
Teacheres'
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teachers'
salaries
had the highest percentage, at %40, which was much more than Other wokers'
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workers'
salaries
, at %28. Resources e.g. books and Furniture
and equipment
were the same, at %15. The Insurance was the least important one, at %2. Regarding 1991, Teachers salaries
were increased significantly to %50. The Other workers' salaries
were in the
second place, at %22, which was slightly more than Resources e.g. books, at %20. The Correct article usage
apply
Furniture
and equipment
was
a Change the verb form
were
litte
more Correct your spelling
little
imprtant
than Insurance, at %5 and %3 in turn.
Looking at 2001, Teachers' Correct your spelling
important
salaries
were in the first place, at 45 per cent. Furniture
and equipment
were the second most spended
items, which were considerably more than Other workers' Correct your spelling
spent
salaries
, at %15. Resources were a little higher than Insurances
, at %9 and %8 respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
Insurance
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