The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the percentage of how people in Australia use energy at their house, categorised
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six different types, and its impact on greenhouse gas emissions. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that most Australians spend power
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heating
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a small
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amount
of them do cooling. The effect
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the issue is mainly caused by water heating, whilst cooling gives the least consequences. In terms of energy-used proportion, almost half is applied to heating (42%), followed by water heating at 30%, which is twice of other appliances (15%). The other three are not used greatly,
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are
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refrigeration
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7%, lighting
by
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4%, and cooling
only
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2%. It should be underlined that energy usage can
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bad effects like greenhouse gases. In Australia, 32%
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emission is produced by water heating. Another interesting point is other appliances contributed 28% to it, which is double
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from
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refrigeration (14%).
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, heating can give 15%,
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lighting and cooling are 8% and 3%, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average Australian household
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Energy consumption
  • Activities
  • Heating
  • Cooling
  • Water heating
  • Appliances
  • Lighting
  • Standby
  • Percentage (%)
  • Consumption patterns
  • Efficiency
  • Emissions impact
  • Renewable energy
  • Energy-saving measures
  • Sustainability
  • Carbon footprint
  • Electricity
  • Natural gas
  • Emissions breakdown
  • Energy audit
  • Environmental impact
  • Conservation
  • Mitigation strategies
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