The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1981-2007.
The line chart illustrates the consumption of diverse types of jams,
such
as margarine, low-fat & and reduced spreads, and butter from 1981 until 2007 in an Asian country. The unit measurement is in Linking Words
grams
.
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To begin
with, the three jams categories have had experienced a sharp drop in 2007. The margarine experienced the highest fall with approximately 40 Linking Words
grams
, Use synonyms
while
, it had a good start back Linking Words
then
in 1981 with up to 100 Linking Words
grams
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Moreover
, margarine Linking Words
also
had its peak at 100 Linking Words
grams
in 1991 until 1996. It was soon followed by butter with a drastic fall of just below 60 Use synonyms
grams
in 2007, Use synonyms
while
, it peaked in 1986 with almost tripled its quantity from 2007. Linking Words
Finally
, at the bottom, there was low fat & and reduced spreads with just under 80 Linking Words
grams
. Use synonyms
This
type first emerged in 1966 and has been rising until 2001 before experiencing a steady drop until 2007.
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Overall
, the proportion of people's preference to consume jams has regressed.Linking Words
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