You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Science
is making greater impacts in today's world. Therefore
, there has
been counteractions, which proposed that the major aim should be to improve Correct subject-verb agreement
have
individuals
lives. Change noun form
individuals'
individual's
This
essay will discuss reasons why I approve of this
statement.
To begin
with, science
has provided us with new technologies, which are been used as permanent treatment
for diseases. To elucidate Fix the agreement mistake
treatments
further
, this
machines
has helped to put an end to pains and sufferings that Fix the agreement mistake
machine
was
impossible to eliminate in the past. Change the verb form
were
For instance
, since the introduction of bone
marrow transplant, which is been used for Add an article
a bone
permanent
healing of sickle cell disease, there has been no history of mortality. Correct article usage
the permanent
Hence
, the introduction of science
has made great
impact towards permanent Add an article
a great
cure
for ailments.
Fix the agreement mistake
cures
Secondly
, it enlightens the citizens on adequate measures to follow regarding their health
. In other words
, it teaches the individuals
safety precautions, Change to a genitive case
individual's
individuals'
as well as
intense considerations when making decisions pertaining their
general well-being. Change preposition
to their
For example
, the use of herbal concoction in past times in Nigeria, for treatment of ailments was endangering the immune system. However
, since Western medicine has been in place, there has been more awareness, such
as seeking proper health
care from a professional and also
being cautious with any fluid intake posing as a form of medicinal medication. Therefore
, modern medicine has played a role with
greater awareness regarding one's Change preposition
in
health
.
In conclusion, I am in the notion that science
is important in improving one's lives
. It has provided us with equipment for permanent Fix the agreement mistake
life
Fix the agreement mistake
cures
cure
of diseases and has Fix the agreement mistake
cures
also
enlightened individuals about the right decisions to consider regarding their health
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