The table below shows the percentages of electronics products used in UK homes in 2005 and 2008 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
The table gives information about the percentage of electrical
devices
usage in New Zealand Change the noun form
device
at
the Change preposition
in
year
2002 and 2020. From an Fix the agreement mistake
years
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that those devices
utilization either got higher or lower Change noun form
devices'
to
the latest recorded year. Change preposition
in
Also
, digital camera
Fix the agreement mistake
cameras
has
the least quantity in 2002 and dramatically Wrong verb form
had
reach
Wrong verb form
reached
to
a greater number in the next 18 years.
Washing Change preposition
apply
machine
and color Fix the agreement mistake
machines
tv
have slightly different data where in 2002 recorded around 90 and Correct your spelling
TV
drop
Wrong verb form
dropped
for
around 50 in the next 18 years. Another item that Change preposition
to
fall
gradually is Change the verb form
falls
video
recorder which Correct article usage
the video
start
from 75 to 60.
Change the verb form
starts
On the other hand
, there was a decrease in the remaining household products. Start of
with the highest of itReplace the word
off
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