The table below shows the percentages of electronics products used in UK homes in 2005 and 2008 . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.

The table below shows the percentages of electronics products used in UK homes in 2005 and 2008 .

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparision where relevant.
The table gives information about the percentage of electrical
devices
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usage in New Zealand
at
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the
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2002 and 2020. From an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that those
devices
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utilization either got higher or lower
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the latest recorded year.
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, digital
camera
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the least quantity in 2002 and dramatically
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to
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a greater number in the next 18 years. Washing
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and color
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have slightly different data where in 2002 recorded around 90 and
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around 50 in the next 18 years. Another item that
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gradually is
video
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recorder which
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from 75 to 60.
On the other hand
, there was a decrease in the remaining household products. Start
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with the highest of it
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