The graph shows the proportion of population aged 65 and over in major developed countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graphs
illustrates
the growth of Change the verb form
illustrate
population
aged 65 and over in several developed countries, which Correct article usage
the population
divided
into three countries in total.
Add a missing verb
are divided
Overall
, Japan
's number of society has risen sharply for over a century, followed by USA
and Sweden which Correct article usage
the USA
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
also
experienced a decent increase of
their Change preposition
in
population
.
Looking at the details, Japan
has
the lowest number of its people aged 65 in 1940 which was only 5%, and Wrong verb form
had
continue
Wrong verb form
continued
fell
slightly in the Change the verb form
to fall
year
1960 to 1980 at 3%. Fix the agreement mistake
years
However
, Japan
's population
slowly climbed in 2000 and expected
to Add a missing verb
is expected
rose
rapidly at 27% until 2040.
Wrong verb form
rise
On the other hand
, Sweden's old people number reached approximately 8% in 1940 and shot up to 20% in the 2000s, it is also
expected to increase at
25% or higher in the future. Change preposition
to
However
, USA
Correct article usage
the USA
become
the least country Wrong verb form
became
which
its oldest people Correct your spelling
with
begin
at 10% in 1940 and leapt steadily to around 25% in 1990 and intended to approach around 20% Wrong verb form
beginning
for
the next couple of years.
Change preposition
in
To sum up
, each country have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
showed
a consistent increase Change the verb form
shown
on
their Change preposition
in
population
aged 65 and over, however
, Japan
still lead as
the largest Verb problem
has
population
compared to Sweden and USA
.Correct article usage
the USA
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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