The two tables below show statistics of workers of foreign and US birth in the United States last year.
The given tables compare statistics of
workers
of foreign and US birth in the United States last
year.
Overall
, workers
total
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workforce
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a workforce
the workforce
that
native country is US was higher than the number of foreign births. Change preposition
in that
Also
, both of them have the largest number of male workers
than female workers
in different rankings.
The table data clearly shows that nonnative laborers in the age
of 35-44 more
unemployed (619) compared to those aged 16-24 (314). Add a missing verb
are more
On the other hand
, many people of
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in
US
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the US
by
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aged
age
16-24 not
provided with Add a missing verb
are not
job
like other ages. Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
In addition
, rate
of employed of foreign birth in Correct article usage
the rate
35
-44 Correct article usage
the 35
age
presents numerous figure
- 6,265, than other ages. Fix the agreement mistake
figures
However
, employees of US birth still
dominant with 28,019 in the Add a missing verb
are still
age
of 45-54.
Furthermore
, total
by gender in Correct article usage
the total
workforce
of nonresidents was lower than that of US-born Add an article
the workforce
a workforce
workers
. For example
, in first
one – 24,357, Correct article usage
the first
in
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and in
second
– 129,533.Correct article usage
the second
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