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Some people believe that educational success depends on good teacher, while others believe that students’ attitudes are important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #success #teacher #students’ #attitudes
Teaching and learning are two sides of the same coin.
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 many believe that there
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 bad students because everything depends on the head of the Teacher, others believe that the
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 own attitude is the primary reason why he or she is failing. Personally, I believe it is all up to the educationalist. First of all, a lecturer has the most important role, passing on what he or she knows to those less
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 than them.
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Therefore
 they must make an effort to use everything in their power to make an individual understand what it is they are teaching. if the boy or girl does not comprehend maybe the teacher should evaluate his methods.
Although
 I do see the factor of
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delinquent
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that is
 still the job of the one who teaches to deal
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 in class.
Also
, it is very difficult for
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 instructor to assist a young adult who just refuses to learn. But
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 digress, there are
also
 times that the reason a pupil cannot grasp a material is because does not make the classroom fun or entertaining enough,
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 the student
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to study. In conclusion.
although
 there are many
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 on who is to blame and who can we thank for the failure or
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success
 of those who are still at school, I personally believe that an educator must be willing to do anything to help those
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 attend his class. in if one fails, he alone should be blamed.
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When you express your opinion, it's important to provide balanced considerations of both views before reaching a conclusion. Ensure that both perspectives are discussed with sufficient depth and analysis to meet the requirements of the task.

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