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The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the number of native speakers of different languages in Canada in 1996, 2006, and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the
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information about the different
category
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 of languages
which were
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spoken by native speakers of
canadian
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Canadian
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 nationals over
a
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different year of
period
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 in 1996 2006 and 2016 after the analysis, it is clearly stated that in the year
of
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1980
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1980,
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 the major
language
 spoken by
bakersfield college
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Bakersfield College
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 seniors
are
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English
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english
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 which comprised
of
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70%
then
 after a decade a decrease of 15% was seen in practising
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english
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language
 which reduced it to 55%
in contrast
, other languages spoken by seniors of
bakersfield
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Bakersfield
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 remained the same with the
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proportion
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 maintaining the same percent throughout the ten years and remained constant
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, a tiny
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proportion
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proportion
 of
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the urdu
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urdu
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language
 has been spoken by these college seniors contributing
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15% and
this
 figure rose
to
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steadily to 28% after a decade
while
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Chinese
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chinese
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 medium of
language
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 shift in their
language
 climbing from 9% to 11%
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, it is vividly manifested
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that English
thatenglish
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that English
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 the top priority
language
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spoken
 by
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college students
while
urdu
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 remained the second highest in popularity of languages
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 4 times.
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