The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows information about the stage of producing

sugar

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from

sugar

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cane.

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, the process of

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have

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seven stages from growing to drying and cooling. First of all, the growing of

sugar

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canes

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cane

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for

timeline

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between 12-18 months. Afterwards, the harvest

sugar

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canes

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cane

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by

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was by

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two methods,

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as by hand and by

vehicles

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machine. When the harvest by two

method

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methods

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finished

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, picked up one by one

sugar

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canes

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to the machine to

crushing

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into

juice

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. After the

juice

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of

sugar

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canes

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,

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juice

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given

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a limestone filter to

purifying

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it.

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, the liquid of purifying

juice

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poured

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is poured

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into

evaporator

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the evaporator

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and heated to become

syrup

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. When the

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already separates

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sugar

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the sugar

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crystal from

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syrup

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the syrup

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with

centrifuge

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a centrifuge

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. In the

last

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part before

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canes

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cane

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becomes

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is

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apply

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drying and cooling the

syrup

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to

big

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a big

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tank to become

sugar

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.