The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of china and the USA between 1920 and 2000.

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of china and the USA between 1920 and 2000.
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The line graph delineates the number of births in
two
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countries
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in
two
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countries
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, namely the
USA
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and
China
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over the 80-year
period
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.
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, it is apparent that the data for these
two
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countries
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witnessed a downward trend throughout the
period
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In 1920, the figures for both
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nations were relatively similar, at 10 and 11, respectively. Over the
period
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of 15 years, the birth rates in
China
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had risen by 5, and the statistics for the
USA
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had climbed by 3 in 1935. In the next 10 years, the birth rates had dropped dramatically to roughly 5 in both nations From 1945 to 1950, there was an opposite trend in the
two
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countries
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, with the data for
China
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reaching its peak, at 20, followed by the
USA
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, at 15. Throughout the
last
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period
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, the figures for these
two
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nations down steadily to 6 birth rates in the
USA
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and under 5 in
China
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, countries, usa, china, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • demographics
  • population control policy
  • One-Child Policy
  • Baby Boom
  • fertility rate
  • census data
  • fluctuations
  • societal norms
  • economic prosperity
  • Great Leap Forward
  • family planning
  • contraception
  • workforce participation
  • aging population
  • urbanization
  • trend analysis
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