This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
The line graph gives information about recycling
such
materials
as paper
and cardboard
, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics over 28 years, between 1982 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that all of the shown materials
had more growth than initial recycling rates. The paper
and cardboard
, glass containers experienced fluctuation, whereas
the rest of the two materials
had increased without any declines.
Paper
and cardboard
had the highest rate
of recycled materials
in the given time period. At the beginning period of time, recycling
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the recycling
a recycling
rate
of paper
and cardboard
was 65 %. After that rate
had negligible rise, however
declined to the initial rate
. Afterwards paper
and cardboard
reached a peak by 1994 after showing a downward trend until 2010 at the end
of the period.
The glass containers consistently moved up after dipping to a low of 40%. With regards to aluminium cans and plastics, both of them illustrated an upward trend. However
, aluminium sharply rose from 5% to 45% over 14 years, while
plastics rose just 5%.Submitted by kazbek.baimukhambetov on
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