The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010

The chart compares the average spending on four consumer items of two different nations, namely

France

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and The UK, in 2010.

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it can be seen that the consumption of cars took the highest rate for both countries. Depicted from the diagram,

France

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has always been the least to consume in almost every

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.

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, the level of perfume purchased by

France

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citizens is higher by roughly 51,000 pounds sterling and a slight rise differs the comparison between the expense for computer buying, where

France

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is greater by around 25,000 pounds sterling.

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, The UK took 3 out of

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biggest

average

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averages

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of expenditure in both regions. The intake of cars, books, and cameras consumption,

create

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a steady pattern where it gradually shrunk by 50,000 pounds sterling from one

items

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item

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to another,

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, it makes cameras shopping

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just 2 times lower than the total cars consumption.