A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job Hello Arsh, I hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to tell you about the job which I found in a local company and is suitable for you as you told me that you are in Canada and looking for a suitable job here. To commence with, it is a project coordinator job in one of the multinational companies in Canada and you have to coordinate with other team members to complete various projects related to furniture. I believe this job is relevant for you because you complete project management and you know everything about how to handle the various tasks to complete in a time frame. I am sharing with you the link to the company where you have to apply for this job you need to fill out the application form. Best Regards, Love

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Hello Arsh, I hope you are doing great. I am writing

this

letter to tell you about the

job

which I found in a local company and is suitable for you as you told me that you are in Canada and looking for a suitable

job

here. To commence with, it is a project coordinator

job

in one of the multinational companies in Canada and you have to coordinate with other team members to complete various projects related to furniture. I believe

this

job

is relevant for you because you complete project management and you know everything about how to handle the various tasks to complete in a time frame. I am sharing with you the link to the company where you have to apply for

this

job

you need to fill out the application form. Best Regards, Love

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greeting and closing

Make sure the opening and closing of your letter are appropriately formal or informal to match the relationship you have with the recipient. In your case, your closing feels a bit abrupt. You might want to add a more personalized closing such as 'Take care' or 'Looking forward to hearing from you soon,' followed by your name.

single idea per paragraph

While your letter is fairly well-organized and paragraphs are used effectively, consider using transition words or phrases to improve flow between ideas and paragraphs. Additionally, develop your ideas fully to enhance clarity.

complete response

Try to provide more specific details about the job position, such as what skills are required, any specific qualifications, or work experience that would make your friend an ideal candidate. This would enrich the content and ensure a more complete task achievement.

suitable writing tone

Maintain a consistent tone that is suitable for writing to a friend. While your tone is mostly conversational, which is appropriate for a letter to a friend, ensure that all expressions used are fitting to the informal nature of the correspondence.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

139 words

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