The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement- making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The flow diagrams illustrate the processes of making
cement
and concrete for building purposes.
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Overall
, There are five distinct steps involved in Linking Words
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manufacturing, beginning with crushing limestone and clay and ending with packing Use synonyms
whereas
concrete production has fewer stages.
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Initially
, the process of making Linking Words
cement
commences with a mixture of limestone and clay which is crushed into powder. Use synonyms
Then
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powder is passed through a mixer. Following that, the product is dried by a rotating heater with an outside heat source. Linking Words
Subsequently
, the dried powder is ground, creating Linking Words
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At the end
of the process, the Linking Words
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is packed in bags.
At the construction sites, Use synonyms
cement
is one of the ingredients which are used to produce concrete. There are 4 elements including 10% for Use synonyms
cement
, 25% for sand, 50% for small stones and 10% for water which is put in a concrete mixer. After that, the concrete comes out and is ready to use.Use synonyms
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