The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.

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for secondary school teachers in 5 countries in 2009. Looking from an

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perspective, it is readily apparent that teachers in

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Luxemburg

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generally earned the highest

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though, similar to Korea and Japan, it required a

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time to reach one’s maximum salary. In

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contrast

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in other nations were comparable with Australia and

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requiring notably little time to top

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. In Luxembourg, the starting salary was 80,000 each year,considerably higher than

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(47,000) and all other countries which were

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loosely around 30,000. The average salary per year displayed a

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similar

pattern with

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Luxembourg

by far the highest at 112,000 and other nations grouped tightly around 50,000. In terms of maximum

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Luxenbourg

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Luxembourg

is again the highest (139,000) though in

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category Korea was second (84,500), followed by Japan 62,400),

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(54,000) and Australia (48,000). The time required to earn those figures was longest in Korea, Japan, and

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Luxembourg

at 37, 34, and 30 years respectively. In comparison, teachers only needed to work 8 and 9 years in

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and Australia in turn to achieve their top

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annual salary
gross income
net income
cost of living
purchasing power parity (PPP)
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The table give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in fivr countries in 2009.

Some people think that introducing new technology can improve people's quality of life in the developing countries. Howevever, others believe that free education should be offered. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Working is an It is certainly an essential things in our lives. true that kids can achieve the best if they work hard. However, not all the effects of this innovation have been positive, although there are surely some advantages.

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this becom a positive or negative development?

The cultures of many countries around the world becomes more similar than they used to be. What are the reasons for this trend? Is it positive or negative?

Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.