The graph below shows the consumption of three jam types in an Asian country from 1981-2007.
The line chart demonstrates how much of three kinds of
jam
were consumed in a specific country in Asia over a twenty-six-year period between 1981 and 2007.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is although
at the beginning of the studied period
solely two different jams were consumed and they had fallen in popularity, in 1996 citizens began to eat another kind of Add a comma
period,
jam
.
Also
evident is, in 1981 butter jam
was the most popular jam
among residents at about 140 grams
, after which peaked at 160 grams
in 1986. However
, despite the fact that the Margarine jam
witnessed a marginal slip, it started to recover in 1986 and in 1991 both jams reached the same count at 100 grams
.
As can be seen, after 1996 Low
fat and reduced spreads Correct word choice
apply
jam
began to be consumed and soared to 80 grams
just as the figure for Margarine. Even though in 2001 all three figures plummeted, the consumption of Low fat and reduced spread is the most at about 70 grams
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