The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces over a period of 5 years.
The graph compares the proportion of overseas
student
amidst high Fix the agreement mistake
students
educations
alumna in Canada over a Change the noun form
education
five year
period from 2001 to 2006.
In general, there are eight various institutions with Add a hyphen
five-year
their
numbers of foreign pupils that kept increasing over the span of 2001 to 2006 with each Correct pronoun usage
apply
have
a varied tally in total.
Between 2001 and 2006, New Brunswick rose approximately five Wrong verb form
having
percent
from 7% to around 12%. Nova Scotia followed almost Change the spelling
per cent
the
similar trend increasing from just over 6% to just under 11%. Correct article usage
a
However
, the most significant change happened with British Columbia, starting from only nearly 5% before it jumped to roughly 11% .
In contrast
, the rest of universities
in Canada Correct article usage
the universities
such
as Quebec, Alberta, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, and lastly
Ontario only experienced a small rise between 3 to 4% in the five year
period which Add a hyphen
five-year
compare
to the others' statistics did not seem highly significant.Wrong verb form
compared
Submitted by onlyfineline on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
▼