The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph demonstrates three kinds of fast food which
had been
consumed by Wrong verb form
were
Australian
teenagers
from years
1975 until 200. Overall
, the figures
shows
that fish and chips Change the verb form
show
was
highly eaten by Change the verb form
were
Australian
teenagers
then
gradually decreased during he
following Correct your spelling
the
years
. Meanwhile, the other two types of food like Hamburgers and pizza witnessed a declining rate of consumption
and then
increased gradually during the following years
.
In 1975, the amount of fish and chip fast food was
eaten by Unnecessary verb
apply
large
amount of Change the article
a large
Australian
teenagers
reached to
Change preposition
apply
the
peakCorrect article usage
a
at
that year up to 100 Change preposition
apply
thousands
Correct your spelling
100,000
teenagers
. On the other hand
, that
Correct determiner usage
the
figures
had been declined gradually until year
2000, and Change the article
the year
the
Correct article usage
apply
consumption
reached to
39 Change preposition
apply
thousands
Change to singular
thousand
at
that year.
Meanwhile, the Change preposition
in
consumption
of burgers and pizzas was about 1000 persons
in 1975, and Replace the word
people
this
figures
gradually increased reached to 100 Fix the agreement mistake
figure
thousands
eaters Change to singular
thousand
for
Hamburgers and 80 Change preposition
of
thousands
eaters Change to singular
thousand
for
pizza. Change preposition
of
Moreover
, the figures
remained steady for both between 1985 until
2000.
In conclusion, the amount of Correct word choice
and
Australian
teenagers
consumption for
fish and chips Wrong verb form
consuming
had been felt
down sharply during the examined period Wrong verb form
went
while
Hamburgers’
and Change noun form
Hamburgers
piazzas’
Change noun form
piazzas
figures
raised up
during the following Verb problem
rose
years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australian, teenagers, years, figures, consumption, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 4 times.
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