The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph demonstrates three kinds of fast food which

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consumed by

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teenagers

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from

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1975 until 200.

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, the

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shows

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that fish and chips

was

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highly eaten by

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teenagers

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then

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gradually decreased during

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the

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following

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. Meanwhile, the other two types of food like Hamburgers and pizza witnessed a declining rate of

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and

then

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increased gradually during the following

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. In 1975, the amount of fish and chip fast food

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eaten by

large

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amount of

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teenagers

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reached

to

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the

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peak

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that year up to 100

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thousands

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100,000

teenagers

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.

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,

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had been declined gradually until

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the year

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2000, and

the

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consumption

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reached

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39

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thousands

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at

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that year. Meanwhile, the

consumption

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of burgers and pizzas was about 1000

persons

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people

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in 1975, and

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figures

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gradually increased reached to 100

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thousands

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thousand

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eaters

for

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of

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Hamburgers and 80

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thousands

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thousand

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eaters

for

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of

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pizza.

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remained steady for both between 1985

until

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and

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2000. In conclusion, the amount of

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teenagers

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consumption for

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consuming

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fish and chips

had been felt

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down sharply during the examined period

while

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Hamburgers’

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Hamburgers

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and

piazzas’

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piazzas

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raised up

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during the following

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.